I don’t blog enough. So here goes: Today I realized that Toney must be able to Cut to a place even if he hasn’t been there so long as he has experienced that place through his Bridge with Sam. Now all I have to do is plant this idea somewhere within the first five or so chapters.
Also, I have got to rewrite Toney’s first Gift training. It must be spectacular and info-packed so the reader isn’t left in the dark.
My wife read the prologue I wrote for the book and went after it with a red pen–well, actually she typed on it using red font. Anyway, she gave me some great suggestions for yet another rewrite. I may still be working on this thing when I’m 80!
— david j.