Despite having written it–counts on fingers–well, I’ve lost count but I think its bordering on five times, I’m going to rewrite my prologue for Scion. The last iteration was close, but no space elevator. It didn’t properly show Ashlyn’s predicament and it made her look bipolar.
This time she’ll start in her uncle’s palace with most of the main Worntenese characters on the stage. It should be easier to show the conflict from this perspective, especially with her parents in attendance.
Wish me luck.
— david j.